Wikipedia:Peer review/Istana Park/archive1

:{{ping|Actuall7}} Thank you so much! Should I perhaps review [[Yusof Ishak]] for you? My only problem is that it's a massive article and I wouldn't be able to provide meaningful comments compared to shorter-length articles. Regarding our conversation on [[Anderson Bridge (Singapore)]]'s GAN review, I have decided to work on some of our national monuments. I have recently expanded [[The Cenotaph, Singapore]] and would like some general feedback from you (our national monuments editor), if that's not too big of a request. Still, thanks for taking an interest in reviewing this article. [[User:Icepinner|Icepinner]] (formerly Imbluey2). '''[[User:Icepinner/Please ping|Please ping]]''' me so that I get notified of your response 08:25, 11 July 2025 (UTC)

:{{ping|Actuall7}} Thank you so much! Should I perhaps review [[Yusof Ishak]] for you? My only problem is that it's a massive article and I wouldn't be able to provide meaningful comments compared to shorter-length articles. Regarding our conversation on [[Anderson Bridge (Singapore)]]'s GAN review, I have decided to work on some of our national monuments. I have recently expanded [[The Cenotaph, Singapore]] and would like some general feedback from you (our national monuments editor), if that's not too big of a request. Still, thanks for taking an interest in reviewing this article. [[User:Icepinner|Icepinner]] (formerly Imbluey2). '''[[User:Icepinner/Please ping|Please ping]]''' me so that I get notified of your response 08:25, 11 July 2025 (UTC)

::@[[User:Icepinner|Icepinner]]: I don't mind giving The Cenotaph a look as well, and would appreciate if you reviewed Yusof Ishak, but I am by no means forcing you to. We are looking forward to a possible FA nom for Yusof sometime this year, to coincide with Singapore's 60th year of independence celebrations, and any comments are appreciated. – [[User:Actuall7|actuall7]] ([[User talk:Actuall7#top|talk]] | [[Special:Contributions/Actuall7|contrib]]) 02:41, 12 July 2025 (UTC)

::@[[User:Icepinner|Icepinner]]: I don't mind giving The Cenotaph a look as well, and would appreciate if you reviewed Yusof Ishak, but I am by no means forcing you to. We are looking forward to a possible FA nom for Yusof sometime this year, to coincide with Singapore's 60th year of independence celebrations, and any comments are appreciated. – [[User:Actuall7|actuall7]] ([[User talk:Actuall7#top|talk]] | [[Special:Contributions/Actuall7|contrib]]) 02:41, 12 July 2025 (UTC)

:::Have just checked The Cenotaph and did a few copyedits, not many issues on that article. Did find this [https://www.jstor.org/stable/26527712 JSTOR source] on The Cenotaph, and while I have not read it thoroughly, it could help with adding some information. You should check it out. – [[User:Actuall7|actuall7]] ([[User talk:Actuall7#top|talk]] | [[Special:Contributions/Actuall7|contrib]]) 05:09, 12 July 2025 (UTC)

Here are my comments:

Here are my comments: