Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Georgiana Hill (cookery book writer)/archive1

====Comments from Tim riley====

====Comments from Tim riley====

I fear I missed a few points at the peer review – my apologies. These are my present quibbles and carps:

I fear I missed a few points at the peer review – my apologies. These are my present quibbles and carps:

*"She produced several works that specialised on an ingredient" – here and in the main text, I don't think one specialises on, but in. Or "concentrated on2...

*"She produced several works that specialised on an ingredient" – here and in the main text, I don't think one specialises on, but in. Or "concentrated on ...

*"Isabella Beeton's 1861 work Book of Household Management" – missing an indefinite article for Mrs Beeton's title?

*"Isabella Beeton's 1861 work Book of Household Management" – missing an indefinite article for Mrs Beeton's title?

*"Hill's identity and work was conflated with that of her namesake" – two points here: first, two nouns with a singular verb (and "that" should be "those" I think), and secondly, I think perhaps an adverb such as "mistakenly" would help before "conflated"

*"Hill's identity and work was conflated with that of her namesake" – two points here: first, two nouns with a singular verb (and "that" should be "those" I think), and secondly, I think perhaps an adverb such as "mistakenly" would help before "conflated"