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[td]:::: I'd have to beef it up in the article a bit but the mail-in autograph promo automatically gave a free copy of ''Comely Woman'' with every ''Lady Jennifer'', and elsewhere I've seen info about how this book basically just sold her cosmetics line. [[User:LEvalyn|<span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small></small>]] ([[User talk:LEvalyn|talk]]) 20:04, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td]
[td]:::::Regrettably, I do not think this Stannard/Strange Winter angle will work out, as the main issue (that the hooks do not make sense or will not interest people who do not know either name or at least the context) remains. I understand what you're trying to get to, but it's not showing in the hook proposals, and given what is in the article, the angle just seems like a non-starter. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|<B><span style="color:#0038A8">Naruto</span><span style="color:#FCD116">love</span><span style="color:#CE1126">hinata</span>5</B>]] ([[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|talk]] Β· [[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|contributions]]) 22:16, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td]
[td]:::::Regrettably, I do not think this Stannard/Strange Winter angle will work out, as the main issue (that the hooks do not make sense or will not interest people who do not know either name or at least the context) remains. I understand what you're trying to get to, but it's not showing in the hook proposals, and given what is in the article, the angle just seems like a non-starter. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|<B><span style="color:#0038A8">Naruto</span><span style="color:#FCD116">love</span><span style="color:#CE1126">hinata</span>5</B>]] ([[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|talk]] Β· [[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|contributions]]) 22:16, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td] [td]::::::You don't think the cosmetics line part is any better? I didn't think that one relied on the author's names, and in fact we could remove Stannard's name entirely, i.e., '''ALT03''': ... that the novel '''''[[Lady Jennifer]]''''' cross-promoted John Strange Winter's Toilet Preparations? (Again, I'd be able to beef up the article properly for that if it seemed like an interesting angle.) I thought "Toilet Preparations" might also be an intriguing product name for a general audience. [[User:LEvalyn|<span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small></small>]] ([[User talk:LEvalyn|talk]]) 23:17, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td]
[td]*'''Comment''': Most of the material in the film section belongs in the [[Lady Jennifer (film)|''Lady Jennifer'' (film)]] article - I'm not sure the 5x expansion will stand after that is taken away. [[User:StAnselm|<b>St</b>]][[Special:Contributions/StAnselm|Anselm]] ([[User talk:StAnselm|talk]]) 21:25, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td]
[td]*'''Comment''': Most of the material in the film section belongs in the [[Lady Jennifer (film)|''Lady Jennifer'' (film)]] article - I'm not sure the 5x expansion will stand after that is taken away. [[User:StAnselm|<b>St</b>]][[Special:Contributions/StAnselm|Anselm]] ([[User talk:StAnselm|talk]]) 21:25, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td] [td]::I wrote all of the film material after the 5x expansion so it's not needed to meet that criteria. Also, I am in the process of merging the articles on the [[WP
AGEDECIDE]] principle that there is no need to have two articles ''and'' a DAB for a topic with so little (relatively) to say. [[User:LEvalyn|<span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small> </small>]] ([[User talk:LEvalyn|talk]]) 23:09, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td]
[td]::I wrote all of the film material after the 5x expansion so it's not needed to meet that criteria. Also, I am in the process of merging the articles on the [[WPAGEDECIDE]] principle that there is no need to have two articles ''and'' a DAB for a topic with so little (relatively) to say. [[User:LEvalyn|<span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small> </small>]] ([[User talk:LEvalyn|talk]]) 23:09, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td]
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[td]:::: I'd have to beef it up in the article a bit but the mail-in autograph promo automatically gave a free copy of ''Comely Woman'' with every ''Lady Jennifer'', and elsewhere I've seen info about how this book basically just sold her cosmetics line. [[User:LEvalyn|<span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small> Revision as of 23:17, 2 September 2025
[/td]</small>]] ([[User talk:LEvalyn|talk]]) 20:04, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td][td]:::: I'd have to beef it up in the article a bit but the mail-in autograph promo automatically gave a free copy of ''Comely Woman'' with every ''Lady Jennifer'', and elsewhere I've seen info about how this book basically just sold her cosmetics line. [[User:LEvalyn|<span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small>
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[td]:::::Regrettably, I do not think this Stannard/Strange Winter angle will work out, as the main issue (that the hooks do not make sense or will not interest people who do not know either name or at least the context) remains. I understand what you're trying to get to, but it's not showing in the hook proposals, and given what is in the article, the angle just seems like a non-starter. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|<B><span style="color:#0038A8">Naruto</span><span style="color:#FCD116">love</span><span style="color:#CE1126">hinata</span>5</B>]] ([[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|talk]] Β· [[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|contributions]]) 22:16, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td][td]:::::Regrettably, I do not think this Stannard/Strange Winter angle will work out, as the main issue (that the hooks do not make sense or will not interest people who do not know either name or at least the context) remains. I understand what you're trying to get to, but it's not showing in the hook proposals, and given what is in the article, the angle just seems like a non-starter. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|<B><span style="color:#0038A8">Naruto</span><span style="color:#FCD116">love</span><span style="color:#CE1126">hinata</span>5</B>]] ([[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|talk]] Β· [[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|contributions]]) 22:16, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td] [td]::::::You don't think the cosmetics line part is any better? I didn't think that one relied on the author's names, and in fact we could remove Stannard's name entirely, i.e., '''ALT03''': ... that the novel '''''[[Lady Jennifer]]''''' cross-promoted John Strange Winter's Toilet Preparations? (Again, I'd be able to beef up the article properly for that if it seemed like an interesting angle.) I thought "Toilet Preparations" might also be an intriguing product name for a general audience. [[User:LEvalyn|<span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small>
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[td]*'''Comment''': Most of the material in the film section belongs in the [[Lady Jennifer (film)|''Lady Jennifer'' (film)]] article - I'm not sure the 5x expansion will stand after that is taken away. [[User:StAnselm|<b>St</b>]][[Special:Contributions/StAnselm|Anselm]] ([[User talk:StAnselm|talk]]) 21:25, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td][td]*'''Comment''': Most of the material in the film section belongs in the [[Lady Jennifer (film)|''Lady Jennifer'' (film)]] article - I'm not sure the 5x expansion will stand after that is taken away. [[User:StAnselm|<b>St</b>]][[Special:Contributions/StAnselm|Anselm]] ([[User talk:StAnselm|talk]]) 21:25, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td] [td]::I wrote all of the film material after the 5x expansion so it's not needed to meet that criteria. Also, I am in the process of merging the articles on the [[WP
AGEDECIDE]] principle that there is no need to have two articles ''and'' a DAB for a topic with so little (relatively) to say. [[User:LEvalyn|<span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small> </small>]] ([[User talk:LEvalyn|talk]]) 23:09, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td][td]::I wrote all of the film material after the 5x expansion so it's not needed to meet that criteria. Also, I am in the process of merging the articles on the [[WP
AGEDECIDE]] principle that there is no need to have two articles ''and'' a DAB for a topic with so little (relatively) to say. [[User:LEvalyn|<span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small> </small>]] ([[User talk:LEvalyn|talk]]) 23:09, 2 September 2025 (UTC)[/td]Continue reading...
