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[td]<!-- Please add all review comments below this comment, and do not alter what is above. So that the review can be kept within a single section, please do not use level 2 headers (==...==) below to break up the review. Use level 3 (===...===), level 4 and so on. Template:GAN/preload-->[/td] [td]I'll get to this shortly--[[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]) 20:14, 16 August 2025 (UTC)[/td]
[td]I'll get to this shortly--[[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]) 20:14, 16 August 2025 (UTC)[/td] [td]*Images properly licensed[/td] [td]*A photo of the entire fort would be useful, especially one showing how close to the river it is, like on page 53 of Almeida[/td] [td]*{{xt|land which belongs to Paraguay nowadays}} too casual perhaps "modern Paraguay" instead[/td] [td]*link captain-general, captain, lieutenant colonel, schooner, battalion, regiment, smoothbore, rifled gun, battery, gunboat,[/td] [td]*{{xt|He soon determined that the planned fort in the Paraguay River be built.}} awkward, rephrase[/td] [td]*Explain the 300 km mistake[/td] [td]*{{xt|works were started to renew it}} awkward[/td] [td]*Capitalize ranks when immediately followed by the person's name[/td] [td]*{{xt|meeting its hill's slope as it declined.}} awkward, rephrase[/td] [td]*{{xt|the fort was orderly evacuated}} awkward, rephrase[/td] [td]*spotchecks made on cites 2, 3, 21-24--[[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]) 00:14, 4 September 2025 (UTC)[/td]
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[/td][td]<!-- Please add all review comments below this comment, and do not alter what is above. So that the review can be kept within a single section, please do not use level 2 headers (==...==) below to break up the review. Use level 3 (===...===), level 4 and so on. Template:GAN/preload-->[/td] [td]I'll get to this shortly--[[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]) 20:14, 16 August 2025 (UTC)[/td]
[td]I'll get to this shortly--[[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]) 20:14, 16 August 2025 (UTC)[/td] [td]*Images properly licensed[/td] [td]*A photo of the entire fort would be useful, especially one showing how close to the river it is, like on page 53 of Almeida[/td] [td]*{{xt|land which belongs to Paraguay nowadays}} too casual perhaps "modern Paraguay" instead[/td] [td]*link captain-general, captain, lieutenant colonel, schooner, battalion, regiment, smoothbore, rifled gun, battery, gunboat,[/td] [td]*{{xt|He soon determined that the planned fort in the Paraguay River be built.}} awkward, rephrase[/td] [td]*Explain the 300 km mistake[/td] [td]*{{xt|works were started to renew it}} awkward[/td] [td]*Capitalize ranks when immediately followed by the person's name[/td] [td]*{{xt|meeting its hill's slope as it declined.}} awkward, rephrase[/td] [td]*{{xt|the fort was orderly evacuated}} awkward, rephrase[/td] [td]*spotchecks made on cites 2, 3, 21-24--[[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]) 00:14, 4 September 2025 (UTC)[/td]
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