Talk:The Age of Disclosure

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Proposed revision to lead sentence

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== Proposed revision to lead sentence ==
== Proposed revision to lead sentence ==


Hello, I’m proposing a revised version of the lead sentence to better reflect the actual content of The Age of Disclosure, based on the cited sources (Hollywood Reporter, People, The Guardian). The current sentence presents a simplified interpretation of the film and does not accurately describe what the film depicts — namely, interviews with U.S. government, military, and intelligence officials about their reported experiences.
Hello, I’m proposing a revised version of the lead sentence to better reflect the actual content of The Age of Disclosure, based on the cited sources (Hollywood Reporter, People, The Guardian). The current sentence presents a simplified interpretation of the film and does not accurately describe what the film depicts, which is interviews with U.S. government, military, and intelligence officials about their reported experiences.


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