Talk:Prophecy in The Lord of the Rings/GA1

* The phrase "It is 12 lines of verse, the longest prophecy in the novel, including the lines" could be changed to "It is 12 lines of verse, the longest prophecy in the novel, including the following lines." Alternatively, you could end the sentence with a colon.

* The phrase "It is 12 lines of verse, the longest prophecy in the novel, including the lines" could be changed to "It is 12 lines of verse, the longest prophecy in the novel, including the following lines." Alternatively, you could end the sentence with a colon.

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:* Done.

* I wonder why you used a colon instead of a full stop between "Huorns" and "they". The sentence reads, "The Orcs find themselves trapped between the Men of Rohan and the Huorns: they flee into the vengeful Huorn forest, never to emerge." Would it be better if you used a full stop instead of a colon and you capitalised "they"?

* I wonder why you used a colon instead of a full stop between "Huorns" and "they". The sentence reads, "The Orcs find themselves trapped between the Men of Rohan and the Huorns: they flee into the vengeful Huorn forest, never to emerge." Would it be better if you used a full stop instead of a colon and you capitalised "they"?

:* Used a semicolon. The two parts are connected.

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* Citations should be placed in order. For example, at the title of a table, "'''Tolkien's reworking of ''[[Macbeth]]''{{'}}s use of prophecy'''", I see that citations 14 and 13 are not in numerical order.

* Citations should be placed in order. For example, at the title of a table, "'''Tolkien's reworking of ''[[Macbeth]]''{{'}}s use of prophecy'''", I see that citations 14 and 13 are not in numerical order.

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:* Done.

:If you make the changes, I plan to make this a good article.

:If you make the changes, I plan to make this a good article.