Talk:Pachyballus castaneus/GA1

Initial comments after a quick reading:

Initial comments after a quick reading:

*Once again, the prose is good, and most of the structures have been briefly explained, but some parts are somewhat overly technical. Thinking of the general public, we should add brief explanations of some terms, in the very same way you've done in ''[[Pachyballus ornatus]]''.--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:03, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

{{ok}}*Once again, the prose is good, and most of the structures have been briefly explained, but some parts are somewhat overly technical. Thinking of the general public, we should add brief explanations of some terms, in the very same way you've done in ''[[Pachyballus ornatus]]''.--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:03, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

**That is very kind. I have added a few more explanations in the lead and the main body.

::That is very kind. I have added a few more explanations in the lead and the main body.--[[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 17:27, 2 July 2025 (UTC)

:::Looks great! Thank you! --[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:07, 4 July 2025 (UTC)

*Taking ''P. ornatus'' as a parameter, I believe the text is well-organized enough. I still think some subtitles might help casual readers find information more quickly, but I leave this entirely up to you!--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:03, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

*Taking ''P. ornatus'' as a parameter, I believe the text is well-organized enough. I still think some subtitles might help casual readers find information more quickly, but I leave this entirely up to you!--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:03, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

*There are some CC-BY figures we could use from Wesołowska, Azarkina & Wiśniewski 2020. I'll arrange that.--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:03, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

*There are some CC-BY figures we could use from Wesołowska, Azarkina & Wiśniewski 2020. I'll arrange that.--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:03, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

**Thank you. That would be really helpful.

::Thank you. That would be really helpful.--[[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 17:27, 2 July 2025 (UTC)

*Once more, I don't think it's necessary to mention the name of each researcher who described the species in Introduction (of course, unless there's a particular reason to highlight these individuals).--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:03, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

{{ok}}*Once more, I don't think it's necessary to mention the name of each researcher who described the species in Introduction (of course, unless there's a particular reason to highlight these individuals).--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:03, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

**I have removed them.

*There were some small inconsistencies regarding the original description (e.g., Simon described the female, not male, in 1900) but I've already corrected that. I've also added the original description AND a good source for the etymology to the references, and expanded the text accordingly. Please verify!--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:03, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

::I have removed them.--[[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 17:27, 2 July 2025 (UTC)

:::Thank you!--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:07, 4 July 2025 (UTC)

{{ok}}*There were some small inconsistencies regarding the original description (e.g., Simon described the female, not male, in 1900) but I've already corrected that. I've also added the original description AND a good source for the etymology to the references, and expanded the text accordingly. Please verify!--[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:03, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

**That is excellent, and really enhances the article. I have added a bit more, including a translation of the title of Simon's article.

::That is excellent, and really enhances the article. I have added a bit more, including a translation of the title of Simon's article.--[[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 17:27, 2 July 2025 (UTC)

***{{ping|Daniel Cavallari}} Thank you for all your work on this. I feel that the article is already a lot better and look forward to seeing what you can find amongst the illustrations. [[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 17:27, 2 July 2025 (UTC)

:::{{ping|Daniel Cavallari}} Thank you for all your work on this. I feel that the article is already a lot better and look forward to seeing what you can find amongst the illustrations. [[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 17:27, 2 July 2025 (UTC)

::::I've added some illustrations, one from an excellent reference that I believe we should include in the article. I'll elaborate on this further below. --[[User:Daniel Cavallari|Daniel Cavallari]] ([[User talk:Daniel Cavallari|talk]]) 18:07, 4 July 2025 (UTC)