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Intro section - edit request from Mr. Calvey's team: Declined request for now (COI Request Tool)
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== Intro section - edit request from Mr. Calvey's team == |
== Intro section - edit request from Mr. Calvey's team == |
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I'd like to propose removing or replacing the paragraph starting with "In February 2019, Calvey" on Calvey’s intro section for a number of reasons: |
I'd like to propose removing or replacing the paragraph starting with "In February 2019, Calvey" on Calvey’s intro section for a number of reasons: |
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I think this version is a more accurate, balanced, up-to-date, and neutrally-worded, or includes statements that are clearly attributed to reputable sources and is therefore better suited for the intro/summary section. |
I think this version is a more accurate, balanced, up-to-date, and neutrally-worded, or includes statements that are clearly attributed to reputable sources and is therefore better suited for the intro/summary section. |
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[[User:MarissaFromMichaelCalveysTeam|MarissaFromMichaelCalveysTeam]] ([[User talk:MarissaFromMichaelCalveysTeam|talk]]) 15:54, 3 July 2025 (UTC) |
[[User:MarissaFromMichaelCalveysTeam|MarissaFromMichaelCalveysTeam]] ([[User talk:MarissaFromMichaelCalveysTeam|talk]]) 15:54, 3 July 2025 (UTC) |
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:{{Respond|orangeexclamation|Not done for now:}} <!-- Template:ECOI -->I agree the current paragraph is biased, but I think the one you proposed is biased as well. Would you like to suggest a replacement that combines both POVs? [[User:Likeanechointheforest|Likeanechointheforest]] ([[User talk:Likeanechointheforest|talk]]) 17:48, 5 July 2025 (UTC) |
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