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{{AFC comment|1=The subject is unarguably notable and should have a page, but the citations for [[WP:BLP|article on a living person]] ''must'' be better than this. Even where there are sources, they do not support all the information. For instance, I do not see " United to Boost Senegal" anywhere in the cited source for that. The source for "First arrest" mentions only some of the information in that paragraph. Please rewrite this ''sources first'': find sources, and then, using ''only information in those sources'', write the page. This is good work on a person who I'd really like to see an article on - please feel free to ask me for help if you have any questions. [[User:Rusalkii|<span style="color:#1C7E85"><b>Rusalkii</b></span>]] ([[User talk:Rusalkii|talk]]) 18:04, 4 July 2025 (UTC)}} |
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{{AFC comment|1=Date of birth and other details are unsourced. [[User: Tenshi Hinanawi|Tenshi!]] ([[User talk: Tenshi Hinanawi|Talk page]]) 23:43, 28 June 2025 (UTC)}} |
{{AFC comment|1=Date of birth and other details are unsourced. [[User: Tenshi Hinanawi|Tenshi!]] ([[User talk: Tenshi Hinanawi|Talk page]]) 23:43, 28 June 2025 (UTC)}} |
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